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:iconautobotnitro:
AutobotNitro Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
That was the only thing I hate about harem manga: the guys are doormat pussweeds with no self respect

And yet I still find this funny. Probably because it's not me going through it *evil grin*
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ShadowWK Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
To be fair, so far its the awkward situation and not a lack of spine.
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:iconautobotnitro:
AutobotNitro Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
Even so, Dusk still comes across as a schlub sometimes. Oh well, he makes me laugh and so do the girls.

Sleepy Hollow: Takes one to know one, buster
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:iconautobotnitro:
AutobotNitro Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
I know, but there's still moments where Dusk can be a bit of a schlub. What the hell, it's still funny and entertaining and I intend to keep reading

Sleepy Hollow: That's because it takes one to know one
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Mordecaiser123 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
see haiyore nyaruko san its really the other way around
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:iconautobotnitro:
AutobotNitro Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
It is? I'll have to look into that
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:iconmordecaiser123:
Mordecaiser123 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
not really
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:iconalterthechronicle10:
AltertheChronicle10 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh man, Dusk is getting beat up more than often now.
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:icontanksmallcape:
tanksmallcape Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Stay there and die!"

My sides.
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:iconzeoncrisis0930:
ZeonCrisis0930 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
In the undisclosed time later bits in the manga,Pinkie Pie has a really creepy stare.
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:iconiisme95:
iIsMe95 Featured By Owner May 28, 2013
She can see your SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUL...
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:iconcross177:
Cross177 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
Sounds weird, but the second panel makes dash reminds me of Revy from Black lagoon
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:icondragonteens:
DragonTeens Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
Nicely done ^_^
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:iconjamesrye:
JamesRye Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
And here´s the Tomboy!
Now kiss!
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:iconworldwalker128:
WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Asking Dash who the Wonderbolts are is like asking 4chan members who Chuck Norris is.
It may be an honest question, but it will end badly for you.
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:iconhereticalrosepetal:
HereticalRosePetal Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2013
Who's Chuck Norris? Just kidding.
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:iconnbbren:
Nbbren Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
dash is scary
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:iconartgazer12:
ARTgazer12 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is very cool
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:iconreina-del-caos:
reina-del-caos Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student General Artist
XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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:iconravetuba:
RaveTuba Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that pinkie holding the sign is so cute ^^
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:icon7thdeath:
7thDeath Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
*go on reading*
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:iconchavis54:
chavis54 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
HA!
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:iconjoethehero2:
joethehero2 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Rainbow Dash: Canterlot.

Rarity: Canterlot.

Twilight: Canterlot.

Pinkie: It's only a model.

Celsestia: Shh!
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:iconestequio:
estequio Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
me encanta tu comic, y tu estilo de dibujo .
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:iconblacklight101:
BlackLight101 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
I really like the plants in the corner. Nice touch
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:iconpunisher143:
Punisher143 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
It really ties the panel together.
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:iconthe-bloody-bishop:
The-Bloody-Bishop Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student Writer
Mmm, would it be okay if I gave a criticism that wouldn't have a constructive suggestion to it?
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:iconxxangeluciferxx:
xXAngeLuciferXx Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
hear their criticism
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The-Bloody-Bishop Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student Writer
Okay. I don't mean anything against you when I say this, but...

Um, Rainbow Dash's pose in the second panel looks a little tense. I know she's angry, but its a little awkward.

Maybe she could be in a pose like she just finished beating up Dusk, like an outstretched arm from a hoof-punch?
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:iconxxangeluciferxx:
xXAngeLuciferXx Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
Oh...Good Idea..
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:iconthe-bloody-bishop:
The-Bloody-Bishop Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student Writer
But its an otherwise good page. ^_^"
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:icontoxyn16:
toxyn16 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Poor Dusk Shine. Always getting the raw end of the greetings.
And I think you mean, "Are you one -OF- those pervs in my fan club?"
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:iconskarmorythepg:
SkarmoryThePG Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
You don't read much harem manga, do you?
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:icontoxyn16:
toxyn16 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've had my fair share, I get the direction this is going. I'm just saying is all.
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